Flash Fiction: Illusion

Two guards dragged Roya to the witness stage. Their metal hands were cold and unforgiving against her human skin. The young judge sat behind a simple desk. Media bots hovered in a circle around both of them, projecting dimensional images of them to who knew how many homes.

This was the case of the decade.

Roya grinned mysteriously for effect. With any luck it put off her would-be sentencer. Enhanced memory and cognition systems or not, he was still vulnerable to uncertainty and fear.

“Roya Mender, you stand accused of psychic abuse in the murder of the revered Nathan Van. Do you call for any defense, robot, congitive, or otherwise?” the judge intoned with apparent disgust.

“No.” But she didn’t stop smiling.

“Do you have anything to say in your defense?”

“No.”

The judge blinked. “Given the substantial evidence against you, and in light of your lack of testimony, I’m obligated to decide your guilt in this case.”

“Oh, I’m guilty. Van deserved to die. All of you do, for the sins you’ve committed against us.”

“I take it by ‘us’ you mean those with psychic powers.” It wasn’t a question. The judge merely went on to give a good show at this point.

“How are we freaks when you genetically deform yourselves to become perfect?” She said this directly to a media bot, glaring into its lens.

“This is irrelevant. You committed murder.”

“Did you ever stop to ask how?”

“You disappeared in front of the policebot only to reappear two blocks down. Teleportation was the automatic verdict.”

“And yet here I am.” She held up her shackled hands. “The shield around this place wouldn’t keep a teleport in or out even on a good day. I’m only here because I wanted the world to know that we aren’t the freaks. We’re the ones that let nature take its course while you altered it to suit you best. I didn’t want powers. They happened.”

“Are you done?” The judge crossed his arms and leaned back in his chair.

“No.”

A female guard walked in, hat obscuring her face. She walked up to the judge with a piece of paper. Instead of handing it to him, she stabbed him in the neck. The media bots swirled around her. Roya’s two guards blasted at her with their railguns. They hit. There wasn’t a way to avoid botfire. Too accurate.

The body was Roya’s. The deadly silence of the room was accented by the photo bots’ shutters clicking constantly. The guard didn’t bleed. The body disappeared into nothingness.

Roya laughed. “You want freak? You got it. But you’re too dumb even with your cognitives to realize that this is a distraction.”

By now a force of psychics with greater powers than Roya’s would’ve taken over their compound of a city. This moon belonged to the psychics, and no one could say otherwise.

She waved to the bots and disappeared from the room, only to reappear where her copy stood inside her home. A man stood in her doorway. He was a precog, one of the most accurate Roya had ever seen. He told her exactly what to do and what to say at that hearing. It worked. She lived. No one would look for her now, with the psychics storming the capital building. The imager on her table showed men and women burning, freezing, and throwing around city defenders — human and bot alike — as if they were nothing but dolls.

“How long will we be in power?” She asked without looking at him.

“Two thousand years and thirteen days.” He walked up to her and handed her a disc. “We gave you a little extra for the dramatic flair.”

“I do what I can. Will there be any bad riots or wars?”

“Not under our regime, no. But they’re inevitable.”

“True.” She didn’t want to know any details, and decided to keep it brief. “I guess that’s it, then. Been a pleasure doing business with my own for once.” As the man turned to walk away, Roya asked, “Why me? Out of all the resources and powers available to you, why me?”

“You’re the only one with bilocation.”

She contemplated that with a small smile as her door shut behind him.

This is for Chuck Wendig’s flash fiction challenge. The prompt? “Must contain psychic power.” There was a list of abilities and bilocation was the one that stood out most. The rest sort of evolved from there. Sorry if it feels rushed or squeezed. I’m still working on my pacing for shorter works.

Movie Review: Star Trek: Into Darkness

So I loved the 2009 Star Trek movie. Seriously, that level of entertainment and witty dialogue is what I want out of my own writing. I’m also a big fan of JJ Abrams movies. Note the emphasis. I fucking hated Lost. Seriously hated it. The minute I saw a main enemy was a monster made of smoke I couldn’t take it seriously. Also that ending.

ANYWAY. Y’all didn’t want to read a Lost rant! No, no, you came to hear me rave about Star Trek: Into Darkness, right? Because that’s all you’ll get out of me about it.

I loved this movie for what it is: a science fiction action adventure LET’S GET INTO TROUBLE DAMMIT JIM I’M A DOCTOR FASCINATING time. Yes. That is an actual genre, specified only for Star Trek movies. Ahem. If you haven’t noticed by now, I am A-okay with movies that entertain only. I like depth, don’t get me wrong (and I love deeper science fiction movies), but I will watch and become a rabid fangirl of stuff like this, too.

Plot

Commander John Harrison (Benedict Cumberbatch) starts some shit and Kirk (Chris Pine) goes on a rage-induced manhunt because of it. From there, all sorts of things happen in typical Trek fashion — as in it’s one series of events after another after another and fight scenes and and oh what wait.

They end up on Kronos (YAY KLINGONS) during said manhunt, then they end up in space, and then and then. No really, this plot is very straightforward and I don’t want to give spoilers.

HONESTLY THOUGH these spoilers are practically not spoilers. Cumberbatch’s character is supposed to be a Starfleet secret or some such, whose real identity is carefully hidden by the higher ups and JJ Abrams alike. If you have even the TINIEST knowledge of Trek lore or past movies, you will know exactly who he is the minute certain things are mentioned (WHICH I WON’T MENTION BECAUSE SPOILERS). Or if you happened to casually look up the movie on IMDb. DON’T YOU DARE DO IT.

There’s a lot of caps lock going on in this post.

Things I Liked

Spock (Zachary Quinto) and Kirk have some fun dialogue and derps. If you liked their interactions in the first movie you will definitely like it here.

All the characters are as lovable as ever. From Scotty (the hilarious Simon Pegg) to Chekov (Anton Yelchin) to Sulu (John Cho) and Uhura (Zoe Saldana), everyone is on par with their older counterparts. I know, I know them’s fightin’ words, but IT’S TRUE FOR ME. I love new Star Trek characters, but I understand why it must be weird (or downright wrong) to see these beloved people remade. I was more of a Picard fangirl. If/when they get to his era of things I’m going to have a hard time imagining anyone NOT Patrick Stewart filling those shoes. So I get it. But still, if Not-Patrick-Stewart did a great job and the movie was good, I’d still like it. That’s how I am.

Holy crap that was a long disclaimer-esque paragraph.

The graphics are awesome.

Not once did the pacing lag or bore me. I was completely engrossed for the majority of the movie.

The snarky dialogue and character interactions even in dire moments made me laugh a lot. The whole movie theater did, really. In that sense Into Darkness is a lot like Iron Man 3, just not QUITE so much. (That’s a different review though.)

Uhura and Spock are a strange couple to me, but I like it. It shows that this Spock is more human than alien, and it’s a nice change of pace. Quinto’s Spock isn’t trying to be Nemoy’s Spock, and I’m beyond grateful for that. Why? Because I love the fuck out of both of them, but if new Spock was just a copy of old Spock he wouldn’t be half as interesting.

EDIT: I FORGOT TO MENTION SOMETHING. I really liked that this movie revolved around the peacekeeping vs militarization of Starfleet. It really pushed this WE NEED TO KILL but is that really right? IT’S NECESSARY SOMETIMES but is this right? This isn’t what we do, is it? Should it be? I really liked that question, and it was something I felt was a nice addition to the movie. (It’s not totally explored. I admit I explored it a lot on my own time though. I’m cool that way.)

Um um um I really can’t think of anything bad — oh wait.

Things I Didn’t Like

ALICE EVE’S CHARACTER. I get who Carol Marcus is, but seriously? That girl was there to take her clothes off and get rescued. She was beyond pointless and useless and annoying. But I have a thing for strong women. Even Uhura is slightly on the weaker end (SLIGHTLY. She was pretty badass in this movie though, and definitely more independent than Marcus’s and other stereotypical female side characters).

Rating: 4/5 stars

Tl;dr: If you don’t think about the plot too much (because this is action adventure scifi with ridiculous tech) it’s a very very very fun movie. DON’T go see it if you have a super hardcore attachment to old Star Trek stuff. DO go see it if you like fun scifi movies with great action and characters.